This story started out great but after the first 40 chapters it becomes an IQ reducing waste of time. The protagonist is the weakest and most indecisive character in the book! He makes all the wrong decisions and falls for the same trick more than three times. He doesn't think rationally and the only time he takes action is the go on rampage AFTER his girlfriend has already been hurt.
man, i read first few chapters, and author managed to make me see mc as totally mentally impaired retard, that does not even attempt to think. actions taken by mc are not only stupid, but also totally random.
To be honest here, the first few chapter hook me up to this novel but after that it takes a u turn and story gets dramatic.First the Mc was shown free and creating his own castle and suddenly he lost his control over power and attack his lover.Good story but execution is too bad and its lost its charm.
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great synopsis must be followed by captivating story. Honestly I just read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, I not completely sure yet but it held great potential I hope the other chapters won't drag this evaluation down.
Different take on the cultivation novels. Characters are well developed and have their own motivations. Even though some editing needs to be done on some of the chapters for ease of reading, I definitely recommend this one.
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