After I Lost My Cultivation, My Beautiful Disciples' Devotion Turned Into Obsession

[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021][Reading status: 8 chapters]-.-.-.-.-[Strong points:]- The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre. - You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality.- The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful.- Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7 - A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him. - Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe.- I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1.- The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one. - The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder. - The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers.[Weakness:]- As far as in initial 8 chapters, none! -.-.-.-.-[Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy][Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]

I like it because it's uniq and common at the same time. I love the storie and I hope thet it wont be dropted any time soon. I recomend it to people for casual read.

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Ich finde die geschichte soweit gut und hoffe da kommt noch mehr. Ich bin sehr gespannt wie die Geschichte sich noch entwickelt wird. Ich mag auch das die Perspektive mal aus "Oscars" Sicht ist.

How can I do that?.I have never ever dreamed that it would  happen like this. I will never forgive myself if something happens to her through this. She screamed so loud and dazed off. Her nose started bleeding. Her body was making no movement and it brings my heart in my mouth.

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Unexpectedly, the middle-aged man was the one that replies to my introduction, full of distrust and sarcasm. It makes me frown upon hearing his words, while the young guard looks down in shame. I didn't expect to be greeted like a savior or something like that, but his attitude annoys me. Even though I wasn't the same as the past Zein, his emotion, memories, and teaching regarding being a Marquis son etched to me. This kind of guard wasn't good at all, he will bring trouble for his village in the future with his attitudes being like these. He should have known that the adventurer comes here to help them, he should at least be respectful even though he despised adventurer.

I decide to hop on the shower cause I had a felling I smelled a bit. As I'm showering off I hear some rustling outside so I take a look. It's Fiona. It looks like she's trying to make a decisions. Then she finally came to the door. "Knock, knock