Just would like to say that the ntr is still in process and it still counts as ntr author.But other than that its shaping up to be a pretty unique story also hate ntr and I want to kill everyone right now.
I can only applaud for what you have written. The way you describe every detail of the world is fantastic! The plot of the novel has caught me and I will gladly continue reading :D
Adam felt himself drifting into a dream, he was a little bird and lived in a nest. Its mother was a yellow bird with beautiful feathers and it brought worms and insects to feed the little bird every two hours or so, until it came no more.
Sitting on the bed with a worried look on his face was Hyou, he was looking at Lei Yun and general Bai Yuan pei trying to determine whether or not they were friends or foes. Seeing this Lei Yun decided to break the ice and help him relax a bit, clearing his throat he walked closer to the bed and sat on the stool that was next to it and said. "My name is Lei Yun, behind me is general Bai Yuan pei of this city's garrison. You currently are in Dantu city and i am the young lord here nice to meet you by the way."
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