Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.
Er Gen+Cultivation+Futuristic Era: Nice!!!!!Other chinese author will most likely made this futuristic cultivation novel reek of chinese supremacy (aka racism), for example by making chinese nation become the best and made other nation stepping stones, but Er Gen made the whole earth become single federation with no different nation that refer to actual nation.This will made international readers more comfortable in reading the novel coz nobody like it if their country become the object of face slapping.Anyway Er Gen was the author that I really look up to since I read ISSTH and Renegade Immortal so I'm really looking forward to this novel.
This is one of the very few novel where the MC is (most of the time) sick or disabled and mostly unable to slaughter the God and Buddha and defeating someone outrank him. The use of teamwork is emphasized and other characters other than MC actually have personalities. This is in accordance with the writer "tropes" which is also the reason why I love (most) of his works. Rather than the usual lucky-genius-protected-by-bazillions-plot-armors, our MC is in constant (and believeable) perils. There are lots of death in this novel but because the author way of fleshing out personality of non-MC character, we actually feel a tinge of sadness for every deaths, even the enemies.TL Quality: 5/5A top notch translation team. A typoe here and there and sometimes gramatical error, but none will distract you from immersing in the story world. A constant and stable use of naming so we get an easier time to remember most if not all characters in the story.Updating stability 5/5A tad slow but a very stable release. Really hope that the ranking is getting better so our TL Team get more Qidian Currency that they deserve.Story Development 5/5One of the reason why I love Fang Xian works. Our hero is fleshed out in a natural and believeable way. There is no sudden upgrades or meeting the old guy in a cave. Not even the usual finding one of the kind treasure which enables the MC to instaslaughter the enemies. Our MC literally and figuratively put his blood and tears for his developement, not for a revenge but because a very ****** and humble reasoning. Later on, he gained a new reason and drive to improve himself, which is presented by a heart-wrenching scenario. A good timing of humors here and there. A good pacing in the arc(s) development. Also a real sense of achievement for all the progress we foundCharacters 5/5The characters in this story are well developed. They have personalities and a proper drive to strive for better. There is practically no "Evil Mastermind" who unreasonally evil. There are lots of politics though. We can't even really hate the enemy factions because they also have their reason to survive. Those overused arrogant seniors bullcraps are very rarely used, and even in the very small number that we find it, they are presented in a logical way of how actual human being acts.World Background 5/5Avalon world building is top notch. The basic "science" is logical. Things happen in a reasonable nature. Maybe because I have read the predecessor of this story (World of Cultivation) I have some kind of bias. But I personally think that any kind of readers who read this story can immerse themselves in the world of Avalon.In the end, it is all about taste. Some of the readers, of course, love those kind of selfish-genious-lucky-MC who have a bazzillions of harems and a warehouse of ancient one of the kind artifacts. Our MC, doesn't even have any artifact, constantly in a debt, and have only one love interest. The love story is truly believeable and reasonable, as it grows step by step as how reality works. I believe, the readers who are tired of the usual niche of single-MC-who-wiped-all-enemies stories will love Fang Xian works in general, because it involve actual politics, human interactions and reasonable plot armor.
"Man! Still as beautiful and gorgeous as ever Diana. Thanks! But no thanks! Cause, It had to be this way right now. Although I might have a social life if there are any other extraordinary people like me. Hahaha! I don't think it will happen right now. But eventually, it surely will. So, just let it be! And my pizza! I'm so hungry already!" said Dan smirking and grinning then touching his stomach by the end of his words.
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