Adam's Debauchery

Listen if you want your story to ebcome better you have to fix it yourself and read everyone’s comment. I might sugar coat this, but many people would not and have no reason to because you chose to put this novel up unless you figure out how it fails it will keep failing. just a comment hope you can understand

wow. monster apocalypse! what a situation to be in.

The writer has a strong skill in story writing.

I'm really excited to see how this MC will end up)