I like how the story is progressing. Well constructed and coordinated plot along with characters sketching. Well thought out concept and descriptively designed background.
Okay, so... This novel will be really successful in the future. The details and writing quality is very well done. There are a few grammatical errors though. The story is clearly amazing from the beginning. The characters are also very well written and the world background plus the action sequences is just beautiful.
I loved Matrix, I liked movies like Equilibrium, Minority Raport, Butterfly Effect, Inception,... etc... so your story has been added to my library. Definitely I will follow ;) The idea is interesting, but to keep it to high standard might be chalenging... I wish you a good inspiration!
Hello! I really like how the story is progressing! However I notice a bit of grammatical errors within the text. I suggest studying a little more about grammar. I too, struggle with the English from time to time. Anyways, I look forward to the story's growth and I wish you the best of luck! :3
Well then, I am not the biggest reader of system type of stories or isekai, but I do read a few like Shield hero, Arifureta, Re:zero, or Overlord.
With that said let's begin, shall we.
First off, the setting, it's very well done and quite the attention grabber right from the start, now the characters they are well made, well written, engaiging and funny!
Now, the writting is good, but it needs work grammar wise (and don't get the wrong idea, I am a strong believer that bad grammar, dosen't hinder a story, nor renders it like many say "unreadable" That is not something that in my opinion hinders a good story and it can be fixed with ease, and me too I make mistakes, lot's of them)
All in all, this is a good story with great potencial, and don't let the few grammar mistakes will ruin it for you!
As for the Author keep it going, my friend you have something good here!
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Interesting Book. Well done Author
The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release
And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I gotta say, the story is interesting, I want to see the progressive not gonna lie, though there are some negative points and I'm not going to say it. Can't wait to see more.
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Good job author!
With that said let's begin, shall we.
First off, the setting, it's very well done and quite the attention grabber right from the start, now the characters they are well made, well written, engaiging and funny!
Now, the writting is good, but it needs work grammar wise (and don't get the wrong idea, I am a strong believer that bad grammar, dosen't hinder a story, nor renders it like many say "unreadable" That is not something that in my opinion hinders a good story and it can be fixed with ease, and me too I make mistakes, lot's of them)
All in all, this is a good story with great potencial, and don't let the few grammar mistakes will ruin it for you!
As for the Author keep it going, my friend you have something good here!
The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release
And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]