The story starts off with an interesting concept but suffers from a few thing that could turn people off. The MC is extremely immature, while also being pretty nationalistic, and is a really thirsty virgîn. This combination of character traits wrecked any enjoyment that I had from exploring such a potentially interesting idea. The MCs way about achieving his goals are dumb. Along with the MC being a basic bîtch, the author writes for an audience that I can only assume to be late **** to early 20s Chinese men. The story may do well in that demographic but it fell flat when translated for a wider audience. Sometimes leaps of logic occur in the plot and the only reason seems to be: becuase China so fûck you!The translator seemed to do a decent job, and the chapter length is okay. The earlier reviews raised my expectations which were not met so that affected my rating.Overall you may find that you enjoy this story so I would recommend you try it for yourself.
Idk if it’s a harem (kinda gives the vibes(hope it isn’t tbh)) but until it shows otherwise this story’s actually pretty good so far (as of ch. 30). I really hope they pick this novel honestly. Highly recommend as of this moment.
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This is Noice. The story's wroting is grear and the MC here has this relatable vibe to me and the other readers as well. This is worth reading and power stone worthy. Please keep it up, Author-san.
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