Abyssal Alterations ( Discontinued for rewriting)

No update for over a month. Looks like another abandoned book on GN.

100 something or 200 chapters in. When Amos Kroc died the story had gone downhill. The mc had turned 180 in personality destroying any bit of character development in him. The story took 180, instead of journeying to the top step by step, the author got bored so he made the mc kill instead. It tries to fix it but the damage was done.The novel at that point was already dying in terms of story development.The character development died because the author wanted "boom boom hahaha look cool mc right? Kill kill" which did not fit the mc. He kills monsters but he was not that brave to murder dragons. In fact, he could have proved himself innocent but author just wanted an edgy novel. the novel turned edgy after Amos Krock's death, and his death was not even that sad, the author wanted him to die (because he added the tree half deity soul which Amos knew but never he said it? Very obvious author).The author got sick of this novels' tone and wanted it to become grim instead of happy, but he sucks at it.

This novel has a little of all and has a good starting point in my opinion and show how the dragon is going to change in to a good person or I may say a good dragon. To help does in need.

Even if she accepts, Many students may criticize her. It is nothing if they humiliate me, but they might humiliate her, So i can't accept that. So, I want her to remember me slowly, the old Lu San, her old bestfriend, our old memories. Then only I will make her slowly fall in love with me.

He runs his fingers through my hair. "I will never let him touch you" He pulls my face to his. He looks deep into my eyes. For some reason I felt peaceful.

The woman's eyebrows rose as he said that. "You wish to use it at your Western Gate? Against those that we call the New Invaders?" she asked him, her voice revealing just how surprised she was to hear that, "That is unexpected."

"Hoy, Fatima, parang ako lang ang matakaw sa'tin ha. Mas masiba ka pa nga sa akin lumamon." Inis na sambit nito.

I rub the spot with my hand as I look around the area.