Abyss of Dual Cultivation: Goddess's Lust system
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: daygon_yuuki
- Status： Ongoing
Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 14 votes)
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Popular Reviews
1) I hope you enjoy this story since it's only here as long as your people enjoy it.
2) I love feedback so I hope I'll get some from you. A comment, a PS , a collection anything goes. (It's a WPC entry so PS would be really appreciated)
3) Rating: it's rated mature and the good stuff would come once we are through with the setting. I don't beat around the bush but I also don't like to head in straight. I would take time to develop relationships so that they hold meaning.
4) Once again, I hope you all enjoy this and we have a nice journey ahead.
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The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc.
Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid.
Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting )
That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.