Abyss Holder

hello everyone 
BlackRaven_ here 
I hope everyone who is reading this novel would love it, I want to create a story that would be something I can be proud of at the end of this story, or my life,
there are many things that I want to do in this story and make it into something everyone looks up to as one of the top stories on this platform.
I hope that you all will like the story and support it.
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The first space related novel I've read and I must say, it's amazing. The writing style doesn't look like that of a beginner, the story is well planned and easy going.
Just the right amount of suspense and thrill. Good job author!!

This novel is really good, the story is captivating right from the start. the Main character has a good background and not your typical past that MC was abandoned by his parents or is an orphan because his parents died in a car accident, the writing quality has a few grammatical mistakes, but of course, considering the author is new it's no problem. the story binds you from the first chapter only. I am really excited about him getting strong and taking revenge on those mother fu**ers in the future .

Am definitely waiting for more chapters.

The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good
the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..
the romantic bits are good
the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading.
bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting

I don't know what to say but keep up the good work everything is great writing is very good and easy to understand the characters are beautiful written this is the thing I wanna read

I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story.
-The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it.
-The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter.
-The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters.
-Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.

Started reading it a few days ago and I found it to be a real interesting read. So much thought process has been put in to create the world. The way MC has been portrayed makes you feel sorry for him at times but the way he rises to the occasion fill the heart with pride. Keep writing author.

I didn't read the story yet . I'm wondering what +18 mean!!  Like describing a s*x  scene or is for gore??  Because if it is  gore i will be interested in reading it otherwise not my type