So before I begin this review I want to say a few things.1. This is my own opinion and feelings on this story as of right now (it may change later).2. My score is relative to the material on this site (meaning a 5 on webnovel does not equal a 5 on a published book on Amazon).Review:It's been a genuinely long time since I've read an original story that has a well crafted setup with an evil protagonist. So when I found this I was naturally quite happy.Unlike most other originals on this site the author takes care to first introduce you to the MC (who in turn reveals the world to the reader). It's actually quite sad how many authors skip this seemingly insignificant step. With this introduction we begin to build a connection with the protagonist and begin to understand his motives, thoughts and feelings. With this understanding breeds acceptance (and excitement for some select individuals). This makes it much easier for the audience to enjoy and continue on reading even further.After understanding his motives and thoughts we begin to see the real magic of this story. How the protagonist reacts and deals with the people and circumstances around him. The author conveys this conflict magnificently. The audience anticipates on what will happen next knowing what we know. And then we enjoy the events that happen later as a result of this conflict. To be able to craft such a setup is a rarity not often seen on this site (which is unfortunate).The reason I will give you on why you should read this story is this (it's simple really).It's an evil protagonist story that will leave you wanting more. More conflict, more introspection, more murder, more deception, more manipulation, more depravity, more INSANITY.It's really unfortunate I'm not able to read a chapter every day to satisfy my wants. Oh well I'll find solace in the fact that the one who reads this review and tries this story out for themselves will eventually (if not sooner) turn out just like me...Overall it's good try it!Current Score: 4.6
i like your novelhowever there are many stuff that are making it bad and this makes me to want to drop the novel atleast for now1.worldbackround very similar to other novels 2 story development is bad u just keep making everything bad every chapter there will be a hangclif and all the time you put the mc in the worst case scenario never 135c never did u give the mc a breath he always is on the losing end vs uncles daddys grandfathers greatgrandfathers grandmas and generaly ancestors he has 0 support nobody likes him im suprised by the second elder but even she cant do **** to support him she is even injured even her personal disciple doesnt like mc which is pure shiet if he had her support it would be much better 3 character design mc morals are horse**** yes the second elder helped him much and she sould get paid back hundredfold yes that other girl with the bow helped him A LOT and she should be paid for a lifetime i agree with those stuff he said BUT!!!!!! his father in law wanted to kill him and didnt just because he had good talent he wouldnt be in trouble in the first place if he didnt barge in with those stupid guards so i dont get his love for that guy. his fiancee xianer ONLY BRINGS HUUUUGE TROUBLE HUUUUGE TROUBLE AND EVEN MORE TROUBLE!thats all i think the fundation of the novel is bad and its not fixable because of the reasons aboveif in the future u still upload and i have seriously nothing to do and remeber this novel perhaps ill give it another try at that time
The story is well written and well paced with occasional extremely evocative imagery. Despite the cover and what the title implies, there is no R-18 content so far as I've read.
Only the bad thing function only ' rate this chapter ' is not working after new update of main website...this interesting story... Well our mc have upgrade specialist talent...and I thing..our mc should can upgrade his talent..due he can upgrade plan(life organisme ) and material...if nice if mc can upgrade himseft like..upgrade his hand or leg or etc. .lolz
I like how the story starts, I can't express this enough. The intrigue built up by the interstellar-esque, rather, space adventure is really gripping, and the feeling carries through to the end of the first chapter. I do feel that disjointed feel between the first and second chapter needs some revision, but the continuing of the plot line that gripped me in the next chapter is really good.
-A bit of a shaky start, but it gets better.-The chapters are longer than average. So if you saw the number of chapters and thought "Nah I want books with more chapters to binge read." don't let that be a deal breaker.Too early to say anything else, but still leaving a review so more people may find it.Best of luck, LC_Icey.
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