ABSOLUTE INSANITY: A forbidden bond

    Author: Saa_Mohd
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 19 votes)
5 stars
7(37%)
4 stars
2(11%)
3 stars
3(16%)
2 stars
7(37%)
1 stars
0(0%)

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  1. DaoistSoulTurtle
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    Yuuichi wakes up in the hospital, he touches his head and then his head start to hurt, at the moment he starts to remember what happened today and says very loud.
  1. slayernominee
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    You'll never know if you don't go (go!)
  1. DBMNovelistLin
    DBMNovelistLin rated it
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    Didn't make sense not to live for fun
  1. alivegolden1
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    We are people who cannot be seen by creature called humans.
  1. qwaseeyu
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    I should have probably put this as a review for the author's other novel, but since it's been dropped now (rip) I thought it better to multitask and try to promote this new novel somewhat.Anyway, it's good so far. I love how you seriously seem to have taken feedback from your first work and improved your writing; it is much more sleek and nice to read, the story seems to know where it's going, and while the book is far from perfect, I've enjoyed binge-reading it the past day (although do note this could mean i am writing this with some recency bias).Now, why the low(ish) ratings? Well, because I think it's better if I'm fair and actually give feedback as opposed to slapping 5 stars on everything, and giving lower ratings allows easier comparison to see how I actually think the different aspects of the story stack up against each other. Writing quality is 4 stars, so good there. My loose criteria for 5 stars is to impress me in some way. Either teach me a new word, consistently use vivid descriptions, use a couple of semi colons etc. Story development is 3 stars because first of all, it's still early, and secondly, while executed pretty well the story isn't super original so far - not that it has to be in order to be good. Same sort of thing for character design. Average, sometimes unrealistic characters, with no impressive or difficult to portray personalities so far. Updating stability got a 4 because it's still early and as a criterion for a review it makes little sense. World background is 3 cause it's decent so far, but again the story is in its nascent stages, and a bit derived. Show me something new. Doesn't have to be crazy. Even something that isn't new, but not normally seen in this genre; that's how i give a good score for world background.Of course if you have any questions at all or want any more feedback/further explanation (and that goes for others reading this as well as the author) I'd be happy to answer. Good luck, I'm enjoying so far
  1. Darksiidde
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    Please support my novel by adding to your collection,giving gifts and honest reviews I would also appreciate it if you comment on chapters. I want the story to be better:-)
  1. bravus69
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    The book sticks to the route of a comedic harem with a slow realization of unknown strength, can’t wait to see whether he assimilates all the tribes into an empire

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