Whoa. That escalated quickly. I knew something big was gonna happen but I was really surprised how the events had turned out. I wanna comment your writing skills. Your grammar is on point and your sentence construction is absolutely up to par. Really good writing.
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is interesting so far.
The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable.
For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels.
Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it", which I thought was weird.
awesome story, perfectly written.I loved it, I honestly love the research done to create the story and how the author research and start the chapter using an awesome quote.
I loved the story, keep it up, and good luck!
Dropped a vote here 'cause it's a very amazing story! Love it. Very unique and interesting... I love God, too. You need references in the bible to strengthen the key points of your story!
A simple yet engaging read. The story flows well and the dialogue between characters is crafted nicely, in addition to the believable atmosphere that surrounds these characters. You can feel what they're going through.
I really liked thr authors sarcastic style, it's really interesting! The story gradually captivates you making you not help but keep on reading!
There is nothing else to say other than it's amazing!
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Hitomi as a character feels so relatable and watching her through the course of the chapters, from her feelings to thoughts, was just great!
Definitely A Gem of Books!(｡ﾉω＼｡)
The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable.
For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels.
Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it", which I thought was weird.
Overall, this story is pretty interesting!
I loved the story, keep it up, and good luck!
There is nothing else to say other than it's amazing!
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