The english is terrible. As a native english speaker I can say that with the utmost confidence. It's strange though. There are no spelling mistakes, but the actual sentences are mashed together like bundles of words out of order.
So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
When you read the book's title, it gave a Valkyrie feeling… lol
Although I like to read about strong males, and I've never read about a man alone in a place full of women. It's kinda interesting feeling. Hope the ML can reach a great height surrounding by women. Go and conquer the world full of women… (Just kidding…)
Keep going!!!
It could have been good but it's written like a middle school fan fiction by an author who slept through English classes. Either that or it's been through google translate. It doesn't seem to be translation though it's pretty strange. I can only assume the author is a teenager or child who understands how to spell but not how sentence struture works.
the grammar is disgustingly bad. the story is somehow worse. i wouldn't mind if the grammar was just bad, but it has reached an extent where I as a reader, am forced to decipher the meaning every sentence. This is not reading, this is torture.
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading.
The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping.
I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
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So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
Although I like to read about strong males, and I've never read about a man alone in a place full of women. It's kinda interesting feeling. Hope the ML can reach a great height surrounding by women. Go and conquer the world full of women… (Just kidding…)
Keep going!!!
The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping.
I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.