A Weird Revenge NTR System (Beta)

Love the story and the main character. Few writing mistakes here and there but overall pretty good. The flow of the story seems to be at a good pace to me with a enough story building and action mixed in well.

It is such a great story. It is like bringing a farm to another world but more focused on capturing animals and things to upgrade the world which I love. Keep up good work

while they were lounging in the great hall, Raizel looked towards the shore and said " I sense two that are of my brother's blood, how is this possible Frankenstein"

I could not even formulate thoughts.

Right then, some leaped into the air majestically, before splashing into the water with a girly scream.

I closed my eyes for a moment and took a deep breath to calm myself down before trying to figure out what the heck just happened.

"Minami Sakurai," Euphie said, still smiling disarmingly at them. "I shall remember that."

So gonna write frog 2 sooooon 🌸🌸❤