any place i can read this for free? no offence to the author, but after 25th chapter, main character is a brain damaged idiot, and given everything he's been trough, he defo should have been somewhat wiser.
He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas.
It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so.
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
Let me have the honor of the first review for this awesome new book.
First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far...
The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop.
It's not really cringe and edgy either and is
tolerable enough to read.
Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past.
Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)
I dont know how to express what i feel about reading this novel
All I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....?
The mc seems to be the result of mixing a face slapping young master into the body of a near homeless peasent and then the homeless dude try’s to act like he’s all that but he has no powers and disregards his system. Until the chapters get locked it’s a story about a mentally deficient bum trying to become a villain but failing. Has potential I’d he’d probably become interesting around chapter 90-100.
The world background and writing quality is good but character design is very bad, it is like every one has smoked something illegal and went on their daily lives.
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He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas.
It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so.
I need more in-depth reviews
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First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far...
The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop.
It's not really cringe and edgy either and is
tolerable enough to read.
Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past.
Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)
All I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....?
Ignore my review
May be the force be our guide,
Even the ones on the dark side.