An incredible storyline. Muse always creates a whole World in her books with strong females <3 . Cant wait for the next one in this series!! She always interacts with her Readers and i love that her chapters are quite long in comparison to other writer`s books.
Hi! Author here leaving an honest review.I want to improve my writing because I knew this is mediocre and I want to make it better.I use too much exposition and find that I can’t write good conversations. there will probably be a lot of inconsistencies because as much as I try to note down all of the information that I use (seriously I have like 16 pages of notes for like the first 30-40 chapters) I will inevitably forget something.Pls give your suggestions on how I should improve, I take criticism well so do your worst.(P.S I will write a chapter ever 1-2 weeks and I should have around 2k words per chapter, no promises to either of those though *teehee*)
It's worth taking the time to read.😃.But we need more chaptersIt's worth taking the time to read.😃.But we need more chaptersIt's worth taking the time to read.😃.But we need more chaptersIt's worth taking the time to read.😃.But we need more chapters
This Novel has great Potential, the grammar isn’t bad, some paragraphs don’t flow perfectly but overall the grammer is good.The story plot is pretty great, I simply hope that u don’t make this novel to slow paced, system novels aren’t great when the plot line goes to slow.I’ll add more to this review if the author keeps on post daily, good luckI ranked everything 5 stars because I dont know yet, I’ll come back later and readjust them.
first, it's an MTL, so if you can't take pronoun errors and random other grammatical problems.. you have been warned. otherwise, it's a chinese cultivation novel with a well-done but twisted mc. there are, however, none of the common nationalism/racism problems that often show up.
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