A Testament Of The Dark Magician

honestly incredibly difficult to get through. I like the concept but the execution is truly horrendous. it needs much polishing in order to be decent

Alright so this is my first time writing a review so bear with meok so i will explain what i like, what i dont like and why>first of writing quality: the writing quality is good, i did not give it a five star since its not on the level of Shakespearean literature but its good so yeah>next one is story development: so must i say that the story's pacing and development is very well done. it never gets boring and will always keep you wanting to read more and know whats next [although i hated how spoiled cranberry acts its very reasonable and is actually vital to her character (just my opinion not a fact) i still hate her a bit though cause she still acts like a B]>ok third ah yes character design: ok so here it is i rated this with a crunchy 3 stars why? cause the author doesnt really care about side characters and when it comes to character description he does it very vaguely which in my opinion kinda makes it bad since you will subconsciously try and create a mental image which will not be good when this thing finally gets a manga>Fourth updating stability so this is the part where i am very understanding and thus i gave it a fat 4 cause i know how busy one can be and how hard it is to manage time>anddd finally world background: so if only there was something like a 4.5 star id rate it since its quite original... ok well except for the system but even that is different since everyone has it and the way it is used is very original or atlest ive never heard it beforeoverall i came for the cliche otome trope but was pleasantly surprised to find something pretty good so yeah pretty much tthats all i can think about to say solid 4.2

It is not a good one. Story developement is horrible. Main character is a complete garbage. Hard to read even 10 chapters. ...................

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Author's Announcement Review for 2021.I am not a fan of mass release but if you fulfil the following obligations I will pull extra sleepless nights and coffee marathons to bring you the chapters quicker.This offer is only valid until December 2021. Free coin codes can sometimes be found on my discord server so come and join it. True fans allowed only, trolls will be executed without warning by the mighty ban hammer.How to earn a mass release?#1: Collective Privi Purchase GoalsEvery 1,000 coins earned in Privi at the end of a month qualify for 5 chapters next month. ** Capped at 25 mass release chapters because I'm not a printer.  I will do screenshots of it and post results on my official IG account as evidence from Sep 2021 to Dec 2021 on the last day of the month so please buy privi before that.**#2: Gifts1 Magic Castle = 5 chapters next week (Usually on a Friday because TGIF)1 Spacecraft = 10 chapters mass release next week (Usually on a Friday because TGIF)If I get more than 1 gift a week I will put that on tab for the following weeks. Aka: Infinite weekly mass release is possible if the gifts keep coming until the end of the story but I doubt I can finish it by 2021 so do your best to make me try. I might even cry if you try hard enough.

It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works

After piercing her throat, Diana collapsed flying on her back in a pool of her own blood. Shinta's eye's widened in shock and despair, his world was shattered his life entirely ruined. Suddenly Shinta snapped  "AHHHHHH!!!!" his fist's clenched as he howled in fury, his face darkens he was consumed by rage.