I recomend this book for those who are looking for a good plot, the Mc is good and normal life apart from the supernatural word is covered. Its good enough.
I like the way you wrote this story, I enjoyed it. You were good at describing the emotions and actions of the characters. I think the character development is good, keep improving! I hope you add more hooks in each chapter
Overall, I like kingdom building stories that take modern elements and apply them to a different world and this has that. That characters are written well and I do enjoy the story. If I had to give some advise it would be to get a thesaurus or use chatgbt to give the author suggestions so I’m not reading the same phrases over and over again. If I tried to play a drinking game and had to drink everytime I read gravity, weighted, measured, or tone, I’d have died in the first ten chapters. But I’m sticking with it for now.
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