A Tamia's Tale, first book: Omen of Death

Steven - Here's your seat .

Before him lay stretched out miles of abandoned machines, wrecks of metal.

Listening in a sad song

Hope you all enjoyed Father's Pride! 😏 What do you think Kai is thinking after that ending? Drop your wild guesses below! 👀 Let's see who’s closest! 😂 For Writing Skill:"I'd rate my writing as... a solid 4, because there's always room for improvement (and I need an excuse for those late-night rewrites!) 😅"For Storytelling:"As for storytelling... let's say it's a 4.5. You never know when a plot twist might surprise even me! 😄 But hey, I'll let you be the final judge!"

10/5 would recommend!In all seriousness though so far it is a great story. It has little to no grammatical errors and the author does give actual information on the skills the Mc currently has. At the time of writing there hasn't been much world building as of yet but it is building up a good foundation for it to be built upon. Nana-chan is a good writer and does her best to deliver quality stories to her readers and makes you feel as if you are actually watching over the characters. With that said you do feel your emotions being directed at the characters and not at the author herself.

A different concept of summoning. It’s not everyday that you get to see a 🐸 frog summoner 😂. And an elf summoner at that! First chapter is intriguing. I’m more interested to know more about the father 😉 though than the son in the first chapter. But I’m also curious to the development of the summoned frog 🐸.Overall it’s a good read to me. I will add this to my collection cause I wanted to know how the story progresses. Keep it up 👍!

I like this story, hopefully in next morning or week chapter 3 will be publish as soon as possible, i am excited to see the sequel of the chapter