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this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design.
just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.
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Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying.
MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions.
Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that.
It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.
Horribly naive and it just smells of wish-fullfillment and not the feel good type... The author probably didn't even read the web novel nor the light novel... it feels that he's knowledge regarding tensei shitara slime datta ken is superficial at best, just took some powers from there and bam! that's it! while I understand that it's fanfiction and the cannon rules are to be loosely followed, this is just *******ish at best, Ancient One "just felt" that mc is good and kind and wouldn't pose a threat... and the name... Lucifer... really? I know how hard it is to come up with original names but really?
Not a great read tbh, there are many things wrong with this fic.
First of all the power scaling is fcked, he absorbs part of a celestial and the time stone in the first chapter and you have him being just a bit stronger than the Ancient one. It's like the author has no idea of the power scaling of marvel.
Another thing is the mc doesn't show any character growth. He went from being a human to slime then killing loads of corrupt sht for two years and still acts like a child.
The mc suddenly has all the random ass ability that comes from nowhere. Like I don't rly mind it but like where are these abilities coming from? Also, the mc isn't allowed to change the timeline of the story or he will be smited. Like wtf is the point of the story if he doesn't change anything?
The mc having an alter ego of a woman and that woman being portrayed as his big sister? I just find this so weird and pointless. I hate the fact he is a coward and tries to hide behind this woman. Also surely doing this would affect him? But once again he shows no difference in personality.
Lastly, as I don't want to go on even more xD You have the mc born into the mcu and you make him be with an oc.... like out of all the woman in the mcu an oc is what you chose? Seriously? Also, meets her and then the next chapter they are already together like wtf????
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this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design.
just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.
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MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions.
Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that.
It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.
First of all the power scaling is fcked, he absorbs part of a celestial and the time stone in the first chapter and you have him being just a bit stronger than the Ancient one. It's like the author has no idea of the power scaling of marvel.
Another thing is the mc doesn't show any character growth. He went from being a human to slime then killing loads of corrupt sht for two years and still acts like a child.
The mc suddenly has all the random ass ability that comes from nowhere. Like I don't rly mind it but like where are these abilities coming from? Also, the mc isn't allowed to change the timeline of the story or he will be smited. Like wtf is the point of the story if he doesn't change anything?
The mc having an alter ego of a woman and that woman being portrayed as his big sister? I just find this so weird and pointless. I hate the fact he is a coward and tries to hide behind this woman. Also surely doing this would affect him? But once again he shows no difference in personality.
Lastly, as I don't want to go on even more xD You have the mc born into the mcu and you make him be with an oc.... like out of all the woman in the mcu an oc is what you chose? Seriously? Also, meets her and then the next chapter they are already together like wtf????
Gl to the author