The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled.
The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.
As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.
Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.
Good job, author!
Apart from the parts that are left unexplained which give some readers a hard time understanding the book, I would say that the book is awesome! the plot is sell defined with interesting premises. The grammar is okay and simple to read.
Definitely a hidden gem. The characters are unique with their own special powers. The story is very comprehensive and the characters are very detailed, so the reader is left wondering about the end of the story. The author is currently editing her story, but I definitely recommend reading it. I'm really curious how it will look when the whole story is complete.
Nice Story! The synopsis is good and I liked the mysterious vibes it gave at the end. Curious to know what all MC will find in her journey and how she would get her memories back. I wonder if there is something mysterious behind it too. All in all, it was a good read and I liked it very much. Keep going author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really enjoyed reading this story.
It was so exciting that it almost made me lose track of time.
maybe there are many things that I understand a little, but that certainly doesn't stop me from reading.
because one thing is certain in this story is.. where there's action, that's where the tension and twists of curiosity occur.
Pretty good read so far. Enjoyable and fun. It is still very early for a full review, but I have to say that it's looking really good so far. Well done author!
I will try keep this short and simple (cus I talk more than I need most of the time lol) It's a very good story! I don't see any real issues with it, and the only (small) thing I thought should be improved was not repeated again, so that is amazing. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't bored out. There are no grammatical mistakes I have seen so you can be assured that when reading it will be fluid. Dialogues are concise yet informational and descriptions are vivid. I did not feel like wasting my time after reading the chapters and do not regret it at all.
Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course.
Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!
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The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.
As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.
Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.
Good job, author!
It was so exciting that it almost made me lose track of time.
maybe there are many things that I understand a little, but that certainly doesn't stop me from reading.
because one thing is certain in this story is.. where there's action, that's where the tension and twists of curiosity occur.
keep up, authors
Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course.
Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!