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This is, by far, one of the best-written novels on this site, and it’s hard for me to find things I dislike about it, excluding two decisions Eldrian made that I found highly disagreeable, but I won’t go over that since I don’t want to dissuade you from trying this amazing novel for yourself and it’s not a huge deal at the end of the day. The MC is overall very competently written, and has a distinct personality not found in many of the bland OP protagonists that litter the site. Sometimes he messes up, but I prefer it that way as it shows he isn’t a mindless perfection robot. This is doubly so since the author made sure to give him some real, actual flaws that hinder him in ways he doesn’t realize and that the author doesn’t specially highlight. Even if it isn’t especially common that it happens explicity, his flaws are pervasive in all the ways he acts and he acts in character very consistently, though he does change over time. The only other novels on this site I’ve read that share similarly well-written MCs would be Supreme Magus and The Oracle Paths, and it’s a huge breath of fresh air. Other than the MC, the world and magic system in particular is super well thought-out, and most of the time unanswered questions are not left as loose ends. The novel is a bit of a slow burn, but it’s superbly executed; that extra time between improvement isn’t filler, but instead juicy bits of lore, IRL stuff, third-person tidbits, training, and tasks, with only a couple of minor timeskips. We’re almost at 500 chapters, and not even half a year has passed because we’re pretty much following everything Eldrian does in its entirety (again, minus a few time skips). This is a huge plus for me, as I really hate a majority of mid-story time skips even if they’re really well done and a one-time thing like in One Piece. Either way, I strongly recommend that you at least try to trad this hidden gem, I highly doubt you’ll regret it.
the chapter 447 make me go from completely love to completely hating this novel even if this fic is probably a 3.5. the motive is in the chapter in question(447)mc have his soul intertwined with a alicorn and they are tied to each other forever,it's extremely ridiculous how author make mc go for it without thinking in the consequences, mc is literally marry a horse(it's already who that the alicorn parents have this bond). I find it ridiculous to think that in the future his future lover will never have a relationship more intimate with him than a horse and the same go for the horse. I think author in trying to give mc a good pet only make unecessary drama in doing in this way
Fantastic novel, thoroughly enjoying the read. It might be slow for some but I truly enjoy the pacing. The MC is believable and not OP from the get-go which truly annoys me. Great read, so far, keep it up!
Another full immersive online game where the character gets progressively stronger in his own way. However, the way it tackles mental pain and the idea of an NPC dying is much better than many novels. Currently looking forward to where the author takes Eldrian/Haru in the future. By 20 chapters in the novel picks up really well and can make you invested into the characters. I wish there was more than one chapter daily
pace is the only red light indicator. this novel is ambitious project, and i hope the author has the stamina to do it justice in reaching a satisfying conclusion .
the depth of thought that went into the world building is amazing. many have tried to tie a game world to the real one, but this takes it to a beautiful level. there is a solid reason the game world is so realistic and the struggle feels as heavy as it should to make the revelations really shocking. the pace can feel long but the payoff is worth it and the relationships are reflective of that. kudos to this story and wish I could blast it with gifts!
I think this is quickly becoming my favorite book on here. The story itself is insanely good, and it continues to amaze me the more i read. the detail that has went into this story is ridiculous, much respect to the author for being able to tie so many things into this story. thank you, cant wait for more!
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This is, by far, one of the best-written novels on this site, and it’s hard for me to find things I dislike about it, excluding two decisions Eldrian made that I found highly disagreeable, but I won’t go over that since I don’t want to dissuade you from trying this amazing novel for yourself and it’s not a huge deal at the end of the day. The MC is overall very competently written, and has a distinct personality not found in many of the bland OP protagonists that litter the site. Sometimes he messes up, but I prefer it that way as it shows he isn’t a mindless perfection robot. This is doubly so since the author made sure to give him some real, actual flaws that hinder him in ways he doesn’t realize and that the author doesn’t specially highlight. Even if it isn’t especially common that it happens explicity, his flaws are pervasive in all the ways he acts and he acts in character very consistently, though he does change over time. The only other novels on this site I’ve read that share similarly well-written MCs would be Supreme Magus and The Oracle Paths, and it’s a huge breath of fresh air. Other than the MC, the world and magic system in particular is super well thought-out, and most of the time unanswered questions are not left as loose ends. The novel is a bit of a slow burn, but it’s superbly executed; that extra time between improvement isn’t filler, but instead juicy bits of lore, IRL stuff, third-person tidbits, training, and tasks, with only a couple of minor timeskips. We’re almost at 500 chapters, and not even half a year has passed because we’re pretty much following everything Eldrian does in its entirety (again, minus a few time skips). This is a huge plus for me, as I really hate a majority of mid-story time skips even if they’re really well done and a one-time thing like in One Piece. Either way, I strongly recommend that you at least try to trad this hidden gem, I highly doubt you’ll regret it.
pace is the only red light indicator. this novel is ambitious project, and i hope the author has the stamina to do it justice in reaching a satisfying conclusion .
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