I would give you 5 stars across the board but you should really go through your work while posting. Im not on to really care about grammar error or anything like that but the amount of mistakes and errors you have made in the first few chapters is unbelievable. Other than your mistakes everything else is pretty good. You have good background for your world and came up with a few names. Overall this book would have been pretty good if you corrected your mistakes before posting. Or if you still wanna write just run your chapter through a word program that fixes your mistakes for you.
I have noticed from other reviews, that claim the author repeats words/sentences/paragraphs to increase word count. I am at chapter 180+ at the moment and have not noticed this at all. There are minor grammatical errors throughout the chapters, but the reader can easily interpret what is being said/stated. Spoilers:My major concerns are that things are not explained well at all. The MC gets a mission fairly early on, which requires him to go and save a girl and her family. The reward is that the girl will become his girlfriend. Why this girl in particular? He was forced to travel to the other side of the globe, but he has never met this person or her family before. What made this girl so special instead of saving someone a little closer to home? The story went from barely PG-13 to R-18 fairly abruptly. At least the author actually puts R-18 into the title to forewarn the readers. The author seems to forget about plot threads completely. The MC is given a side quest in chapter 49. We as readers know that he goes above and beyond what is required of him, and yet there is no mention of him ever receiving the reward. In multiple chapters, the MC asks his system how to help a paralyzed little girl walk again. The system says that she needs to eat level 30+ beast meat for her to regain the ability to walk. The MC has killed multiple beasts that are level 30+, and yet the author has completely disregarded the little girl and we as readers have no idea how she is doing. The MC is rewarded for killing creatures who are well above his level. However, this seems to be fairly arbitrary. At one point, he kills a creature 20+ levels above his own, and there is no mention of a special reward for killing the creature. Part of his rewards at one point, are potions to forcefully evolve someone as well as the ability to completely heal someone of the zombie virus if bitten. However, after receiving these items, the author makes no mention of giving them out except to say that evolving naturally is more beneficial than using a potion. He has scientists who are studying the virus and have stated they have personally made a cure to the virus. This plot thread was dropped like a bag of rocks.The author seems to forget how skills work, especially his original Bear Passive skill (I forget what its called). It is supposed to give him something like +1 Strength and Stamina every 3 days. However, this is not reflected in his character sheet at all. Multiple months have gone by, but his character sheet barely changes at all. The author also only has the MC distribute stats in multiples of 5. So if the MC wants to increase both Strength and Stamina for example, he saves up skill points for 2 full levels before distributing them instead of say 2 for Strength and 3 for Stamina. While I understand doing it this way makes it easier to keep track of how point are distributed, someone living in an apocalyptic world would not have this luxury. it is for these reasons why I give my overall review.
The first novel i ever readed, that brought me better understanding in the true essence of "life" and the various principles that commands "life".Er Gen, definitly reached a lot of ephitany on the "mastery of the mind" and it is reflected in this story.Thank you Mr Author, thank you Mr/s Translator, thank you Mr/s Editor.Why do we read? Do we read for reading? Why do we eat? Do we eat to eat?......This novel is the only must read i would ever recommand in your pursuit of mastery of your highter self, it brings perspective that you can't find anywhere else.The Universe is amazing.
É incrível o jeito que conseguiram criar uma sociedade mágica no mundo de Harry Potter sem o mundo bruxo saber.Isso trouxe um futuro muito promissor para a trama, afinal pode trazer dúvidas ao leitor deixando o enredo bem mais chamativoDesculpa escrever em português mais fiquei animadaa
The author came in strong with this continuation of their novel World Domination System. It starts off solid and shows great promise for the continued world building. Unfortunately the book has been dropped and is highly unlikely to be continued at this point. Reader beware
wow. good introduction and the explanations were clear. also, i like the part that you were using the original sins devil names on the characters it makes it more interesting
What can I say? This novel is just another level, the grammar is good, and there are some mistakes but that's normal, and is more than possible to read it.We have at least one or two chapters every week, and that's fine with me.The story development is very interesting, bruh he is a WORLD, and the author doesn't hurry the story.Furthermore, the character design and the world background also are very nice, character design can improve, but they have something uncommon, they are ALIVE. And the background is still making but so far is very good.
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