Fabulous world building and lore. Nice character outline. Good plot pacing with quality.The Updates are good considering the quality.I feel like Cultivation System is diverse and the writer has a long vision for it.
All in all, not a terrible read so far. There are some repeated parts like how many times she's told about her bloodlines and the dangers. Also with how many times she's told she's not alone. Its a bit fast paced in a nonsensical way, but I'm looking forward to how things will develop. I would like to see a more in depth background on the other characters like Alaric and such, also more descriptive world build. 12 chapters in and all we really know is that she's the last of hee bloodline. She could be powerful, and ppl want her. This story has serious potential. You got this! make it great!
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