A Highest Rank in Another World!

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Mesmo em poucos capítulos a narrativa mostrou potencial, alguns aspectos ainda podem ser melhorados (Como a repetição de algumas palavras, e afins). Mas concluindo, achei legal!      
Boa Sorte daqui para a frente XD!!

Doarinha. Tem palavras que poderiam ser trocadas pra soar como algo mais natural e um pouco mais de descrição da aparência dos personagens seria legal. De qualquer forma, ganbatte!

First, thanks for this book.

Here is my review;
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The story and world background, power system and the system item has a very good concept. The idea behind it is great if you understand what the author is trying to portray. The same applies to the character.

But here are the challenges;
Though, there is a very good concept, the way they are executed are poorly done. The characters feels plain, the descriptions are the same. The emotions aren't shown or are almost nearly non-existent.

For example, Lucian or rather the main character of this story is supposed to be a veteran, an S rank adventurer but the way he is written as makes him look more of an amateur than a veteran. His thought process is almost like a kid, and  even kids have emotions but we readers didnt feel any. For example

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