A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

Not bad, world building is pretty solid. There are some commenters insisting on spoon-feeding. They lack the capability of just a bit of critical thinking. Overall something a bit different and very welcome.

I think this has great potential, writing quality is not the best, but the story line and the character development is very realistic. I can't wait to see where this leads.

Found your book recently, and was instantly hooked. Can't wait for more chapters.

Writing Quality: Great writing. No obvious grammatical errors. Good sentence.
Story Development: Very interesting plots. Has multiple plots for different characters going on. Curious on how these plots will interact.
Character Design: MC isn't flawless, feels human. MC can grow as a character, and isn't that over powered.
Side characters also feel real. They have history, problems/issues to work through.
Updating Stability: Decent chapter rate. Consistent and author will say if something delays an update.
World Background: Great worldbuilding.

bit.ly/3LyRF1N

For a character that have transmigrated so many times, the mc sure doesn't act like it. The mc acts like a child afraid and unsure of everything. With so much experience, I would expect that he'll mostly be apathetic and at least be able to lie proficiently. The character is disappointing. More than 364 transmigrations and he's still sweating while lieing and people can still play him anyhow. Truly disappointing

Author here!

Hi Guys, I hope you enjoy the adventure of these unlikely heroes! This is my first Isekai/ Reincarnation Novel. So, pardon me if you find the writing crude.

I am doing my best to improve my art and writing style. I hope you support this novel and don't be shy to comment, do a review or vote!

Thanks for reading this!

This review is written after reading the latest chap at this moment. (Chapter 7)

I'm not the type of person who casually gives a half-hearted review to please others and I'm brutally honest about it... Perhaps...

Anyway, the writing quality is quite good and there were no major mistakes that could take one away from their reading immersion aside from a few tense shifts. But the latter can be worked on through editing.

5 for story development. There were no forced interactions and everything seemed logical so far. Just that, the gods felt so weak in my opinion.

Characters aren't fleshed out yet and this might be because of the lack of chapters. This includes the MC himself. <- This opinion may change depending on how the author approaches this point.

Update Stability 5

Aside from the characters, the setting wasn't properly explained yet. Again, this might be because of the lack of chapters. But the good thing is that I can see development in this area.

All in all, this book has the potential to reach top 100 for originals (based on my experience). Only of course, if the book manages to get its well-deserved attention.

I had high expectations, but honestly i am dissapointed by his hero complex and frustrated by the cliche villians.

I wish you the best, amma peace out.