I am deeply ashamed to say that I read this up to chapter 690. There was obviously flaws in the novel but overall the fighting was exciting to read. Also, the MC was interesting to say the least. He knew who he was well and had his own boundaries. However it started to degrade when the female lead arrived. At first it was subtle but as the novel went on it was simply emotional manipulation to help her parent to gain power. Also, this MC is the guy in most wuxia novels that spoil their daughters to the maximum and let them do what they like and have such horrible attitude. His way of raising his children is disgusting. He spoils his daughter too much and devalues his son and lets him become the protector and comply with her demands. That sort of mentality made me cut off my interest so quick. If that was not stupid enough, the daughter's crush was talking crap about him on his land openly and his daughter let him do it with her protection while his wife thought it was a minor thing and overlooked it. He failed as a parent. He is the worst parent I have read on Webnovel as a MC. His daughter has no respect for him at all, she even wanted to hit him and he was chill about it and said everything was his fault. I am done with this crap of a novel. I cannot believe I wasted so much. Also his wife is a such a bad mother, she made him apologize and orderes him make her daughter happy again. This might seem minor but what is the point being the strongest if your family are spoiled and rotten people no matter their talent? I wish he was single or at least didn't have children. It ruined his character. He knows the guy his daughter has a crush on has bad motives and even the daughter knows about it yet he promises him cultivation pills, techniques and his protection when he gains higher levels for him not to contact his daughter again.This is super retarded. I am so angry at myself for reading garbage. Absolute TRASH.
You know what... the quality of translation is at the level of machine translation... so bad translation isn't seen every day... one would expect more from official translation but I had the same feeling as reading on LNMTL
Overall, the first five chapters of this novel demonstrate a promising start to the story with well-developed characters and an immersive world-building.Lei Zhen, the protagonist, is introduced as a level-headed and calm individual, with a distinct lack of lustful behavior towards the mature woman clad in green robes, showing his character's depth and credibility. This is further reinforced by his clear and logical thought process, as seen in his decision to accept the default setting for his character creation rather than risking a time-consuming process of creating a new character from scratch.The world-building of the game, Magnolia, is also well-established, with the incorporation of the VRMMORPG aspect and the existence of different game classes for players to choose from. The concept of Unique Classes, obtainable through hidden missions and story quests, adds an additional layer of mystery and excitement for players.The system within the game is also well-explained, with the use of equipment providing bonus stats and the function of the scanner during character creation. However, the occurrence of the bug that transported Lei Zhen to the high-level Lux Forest raises questions about the reliability and stability of the game.One constructive criticism for the novel would be the lack of description and detail in the setting and environment of Lux Forest. While it is mentioned that the area is filled with greenery, more specific and immersive descriptions of the surroundings would further enhance the reader's experience and understanding of the character's location.Overall, the first five chapters of this novel have successfully drawn me in as a reader and piqued my interest in the story. I am excited to see how the plot progresses and how Lei Zhen's character will develop in the immersive world of Magnolia.
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you.Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D
The story is amazing but there are some mistakes in the sentences. Don't worry about it though as the story is to amazing to care about some small mistakes.
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