A FAILURE'S HOPEFUL JOURNEY

You made me laugh easily in the first chapter. Basically your writing style is superb. Such foul mouthed creature is always the best(but if it is with me O think I can't handle it) Wish you continue updating author-san

The story is much more amazing than the synopsis made it out to be. There are sentences in the first chapter that had me laughing out loud. Good job, author!

Thank you author for thIs story. I like the step up upfront - both the You’s siblings lost their parents and how he had then transition into this dimension that open a whole new perspective how the story evolve with the “system” and the magic of his wrist band. The description of the realm and the level of elevation is clearly depicted. Looking forward to see the story climax and how Xiwang’s and his sister’s character would evolved. As the head of the You family and the Council of elders roles are introduced - look foward to see how Xiwang will continue to defend his famIly’s position in the power play. Keep up the the good work. It’s a great compilation of charaters and how they will play off for those into martials arts. The story method is in depth with varying dimension used navigating readers back and forth in and out of the system realm - can be complicated but worth the wait to analyse the plot leaving readers anticipate more! Keep up the good work and effort author!

i really love this story! the sypnosis got me thrilled and excited! your style of writing is so good. each chapter is uniquely written that makes me scream for more chapters!

This story is fun. I can see this story becoming more intense as the story progresses. Content wise it's incredible I'm hoping to read this in my spare time.