This story Is a loaded bomb. normally I would have read 10 chapters before I review but reading through the blurb and the chapter one, i need not bait an eye before I review this story. wonderful idea by the author "in a world where people can extend their lifespan by being happy" wow! just wow!
The introduction hooked me, and I got sucked into a world that was wonderfully described by your descriptive language and interesting plotline.
Although there is the occasional odd switch to present tense, or the rare typo, it does little to take away from the story.
Well done, author.
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Although there is the occasional odd switch to present tense, or the rare typo, it does little to take away from the story.
Well done, author.
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