Its a great story dont get me wrong but the author really needs a proofreader there are mistakes everywhere but other then that its really worth reading
Lemme begin from quality (GAWHD!) it's so great and highly readable, world building and creation of hype along with the character insights is awesome. Oh! I liked the humorous remarks by the family and the system making plus the guild scenario. The tinge of lust and the sprinkle of their bond- attraction. The world building is fine too and especially the dealing with newly found powers is a great descriptive part. The words and vocabulary chosen is absolutely amazing and it differs from the regular system we read which kind gets complicated but this is far cooler to understand cuz if 'showing' factor. Lesha and Kiada have great beginning tbh and the characters seem real with their down to nature and life problems.
I gulped my saliva, and concentrated on my new opponent. In one instant he was near me, I was startled, even with chakra sens I couldn't see his movement. He kicked at me and I blocked the kick but was thrown ten metres before I stopped "So strong!" I said in my mind.
Mogranius was born here and this was his home. The abandoned house he usd to live in, was destroyed long ago by time so a new one could be constructed.
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