A Daughter of an Ex-mafia

Character design is vivid. I can already make out what Sanjay looked like and her attributes. Story wise although not much to say at the moment (3 chapters) do leave me wanting to know more.

Sanju is the type of girl you want to be but don't want to be friends with she is mentally strong and keeps too much things to herself, I like her personality and Rosh is my favorite, handsome hunk who could lead a conversation... Interesting novel a good read.

whoa~ calm down MC

Great story with solid writing, an intriguing story, amazing description, and interesting characters. I think the writing is solid, with a few minor things that could be changed (some paragraphs should be shortened). This is definitely worth the read for a different type of story to enjoy.

As a new author you did a great job writing this book. The comedic relief each chapter has is very good. Also the self talking part. It reminds me of my own book.

So far, i only read 5 chapters. And i really like how the plot is developing. So i think you did a great job author. Keep up. [img=recommend][img=update]

Because so far it only has three chapters (at the time I read this), the plot is still unclear. I hope the author could develop more and answer the questions that might arise in readers.
Writing-wise, I see rooms for improvement. With more practice, you're good to go. Learn by reading other books as well to help you construct better words and nuances, how to describe certain things.
Best of luck dear author ✨ Don't ever give up!

The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me