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Good translation, and easy to understand without removing from the plot of the story. A good job was done overall. There may be an occasional mistake here or there but the author tried their hardest.
Quite an enjoyable read, this novel is. I enjoy this type of theme, the critical return. It has been used in other novels, however I find each story, maybe similar, it delivers it’s own individuality for the reader to enjoy.So far only 20 trial chapters but I find myself wanting more to read. Hopefully it will be selected and be available for us to enjoy.
Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.
In the last few weeks the quality of the translation has become worse and worse. This translation is again an example that it is simply a MTL and not one has taken the trouble to check the chapters before it was uploaded.The Story itself looks fine but I only read the first two chapters and then stopped because of the quality of the translation.
you can try it it isn't that bad from the raws the fact of the strength in the game increase the strength of reality every player has it only the store is unique and also to play the game what you need isn't headset but rather a container some people enter the game through pendant or even cards and it can be anything so you can give it a try (from ch70)
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