For anyone wondering, I think the novel has the potential to be fantastic. However, the author desparately needs to hire an editor. You can understand what is happening and what the author is describing, but the verbiage and sentence structure is really, really bad.
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.)Writing Quality:Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author. Story Development:This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted. Character Design:An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him. I am curious how he might change throughout the Story. Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him. Summary:Cute apex preditor snail is cute.
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