Painful read. I enjoy the story it’s just that it jumps soo much, without warning or indication of different perspectives. Like lets say plot points in a to b to c and so forth. It moves like a to c then loops back around to b to c. Story is meh in sadness it’s selflessness and self sacrifice. I am enjoying it though as above with the a to c stuff.
I wanted to like this story. But the details are inconsistent and the timeline doesn’t make sense. In the beginning she had like a month before she turn 18. The was with the pack for like 4 days, maybe a week at most, and suddenly she’s 18.
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