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    A bit of a missed opportunity with theis one. Read 30 chapters, way too little progress and way too much time spent  with the gf.
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    I like how the story isn't flooded with just adding disciples. however, character development is a major weakness
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    <p>It would be a pity to just kill her</p>
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