It's just a bad piece of literature (if one can call it that). The grammar, the tenses, and the sentence structure is bad and needs revising. The objectification of women is bad and a dumb choice.The logic behind the system and the different things in the world is flawed and inconsistent. E.g guns made pre-WW2 era works but any post-WW2 gun does, somehow, not work. (+The systems guns work?) The principle behind them is pretty much the same for the two sides. The units of measurement is not well planned. In other words, I do not recommend you read this novel if you don't want to lose brain cells.
While I may not be the best at this, I think its honestly a very good book to just relax and read with some snacks and a drink in a big comfy chair or your favorite reading spot for a long period of time. It does have some characteristics that at this point are common but it gives it A nice twist that makes it more interesting and even a little spicy depending on what your Interests are. Really hope this gets picked back up, waiting for another update!!!
I thought he was going to act like a 10000000 year old because he believes that he is him and has the memory’s but he just flustered because a random girl cry’s. he has many wives btw. If a single female is killed in this novel dies i will be shocked.
Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!
One of best mystery novel I have ever read. There is always a feeling of mystery while reading. If there is anything to take fault with is its extremely slow story-line progress and slow update. Very recommended for people who like to binge read.
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