Creative Writing skills .The story develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. Words that complement the story as a whole. A great read.
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Hmm. There are so many things I can relate especially with the ML's situation with his mother.Writing Quality: The narratives are all easy to read which is a plus. There are g-errors but not to the point it hinders the meaning and your reading.Story Development: There are still few chaps but the readers could already made some hints with the conflicts the ml will face in the future.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out and their appearances where describe well that we can imagine them clearly. Updating Stabilty: So far, the author has a stable update.World Background: Well written.Overall this book is quite enjoyable read.Great work author! Keep it up!
The arrow on my right hand lit up and my hand started to move by itself. I couldn't control my hand, it went inside my pocket and dug out the crystal. My hand grasped tightly to the crystal.
As much of a berserker as she was, she was also very lucid when the situations weren't as hectic. When she just walked around, outside of combat, she didn't lose her mind too much to rage. When she was alone or just doing something casual, she could think very clearly.
"No...Eon does not have such motive.....even if had...." Lin without completing the sentence cover her face with her hand and started to act like a shy lady.
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