Hello, this is author.Actually, this is not my first story on this web. I failed some and trying to get this story done. But I need your help to support this story from now, so I can get real to finish this one. Even a little support like liking the tag is quite much to help me get enthusiastic to continue the story.
Honestly it could be better, besides the cover art you can’t really imagine what most of the characters look like for example, I don’t know what you want me to imagine when it comes to Sophia or Grin Scurvy as you didn’t describe what they look like as a character
Alright, decided to review as I've gotten a feel of the story and its direction a littleThe grammatical errors dampen this novel a bit, nevertheless it's readable and the plot is interesting. The few chapters that I've read have been good despite the errors. English isn't the author's first language and considering that, the author has honestly done a good job.My advice would be to find an editor to help you with this as it will go a long way in adding more life to your novel. Besides that, the development of the story and the world building has been beautifully crafted. Hope you keep on writing and getting much better, this novel has a ton of potential. I'll be reading and showing my support author.
Then, those archers meet the same fate with their colleagues, the mage knight, having a magical cursed engraved into their soul and body. Enslaved by Nindya without prior notice.
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