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This is a very good novel and something that you can easily sink into however at the pace the story is going where it takes 500 chapters for a single token we may never see the end of this novel. That being said it has amazing character development and world-building and is overall a very good novel.
i read 60 chapters in the raw and it looks promising ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Disclaimer: Types of stories like these are not my cup of tea, so I won’t lie, I did not go far in this story. But from what I read, I will give an honest review. It is a good story for readers who lije stiff like this. Your writing is good and interesting, although you have grammar mistakes that need to be fixed(dialogue and the big spaces you have between the commas). Break up your paragraphs a little, too. Other than that I seen no other problems, your character building is good and the ones who like stories like this, will enjoy it. Keep up the good work!
In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP
Right at that moment, the door opened, and immense light entered the room. Li Yu Ri squinted her eyes at the light to see a figure of a person, particularly a girl. The girl looked extremely familiar with her cold eyes and straight shoulder-length hair. The girl said, "Sheng Hi Fan! What are you doing here with Class 1-2's students?" Everyone finally saw her face which was very beautiful and alluring. She.Was.Class.1-1's.Class.President.Song.Lin!
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