World Of Fibre Generals

Did you drop this?? This story was getting intresting

The story is in its early stages but already the characters are established and are interesting. The girl and boy have their flaws and insecurities. I hope the author decides to stick arounds. I don't read many romance stories but I like to see the ending of the ones I do.

Although I do not want to spoil anything, I think the story is good, I appreciate the names' inspiration, and I only hope Ragnarok gets to see his parents again. They will surely suffer until his return.  

I really enjoyed the story so far.What went well- very good building of the setting with intriguing characters to back it up.In depth view of the characters and their thought process.Improvements- tone a tad bit down with the description,especially of the girs, as too much of it makes it lose it’s purpose and can instead make it seem repetitive. Overall enjoyable read. Keep it up.

This book is solid. The setting is intriguing, and the mysteries keep things engaging. Ishizaki, the main character, feels grounded and relatable—just a guy trying to survive in a brutal world. With solid pacing and plenty of potential, this is definitely a story worth keeping an eye on.Of course, he has yet to get deep into the mysteries, but I think he has done solid work worth appreciating.