spoilers --I got a free trial preview and made it to chapter 31.the story kinda ends at 28...chapter 29 is called end/beginningand it continues like a new book with elements from the previous.Until 28 it seemed like everything was good; MC got back on his feet, got stronger, got a love interest, a new family, and an evil organization to fight. Then it goes from storytelling to a quick summary of everything going wrong.The author summarizes MC losing control to kill off his new family-- which will ruin his new romance. Not showing like a two chapter battle, but telling, like "He woke up, ripping out Roderick's heart." Yeah I suppose the crystal might have controlled his mind, or the system he swore to kill might have nerfed him again................I read three more chapters hoping for an explanation but it just rolls off in a different direction. Maybe I left too soon. You wrote the characters so well, I was invested in the characters and felt like they got flushed for a different story direction.
This is one of the most unique novel i have read . the world building is solid and characters emotions can be feel . keep up the good work and i want more more More MOre MORe MORE MORE MOREEE MOR
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The following day was silent, Aaron heard nothing from the White Fang headquarters. It took him a whole hour of staring at his scroll to get the message into his head, but as he laid back into his bed, he couldn't help but feel relieved. The emotions he had pent up from the night before were still there, lingering in the back of his mind, but knowing that'd he get a small breather to recuperate was wonderful. It wasn't like he was used to killing someone.
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