Wargod Ares

Basic anti Japanese novel by Chinese And the mc is a full blown retard he acts like a 8 yr old when he’s Supposedly 10000 yrs old+.         

Great book, love it. Gives off self-insert vibes, but most webnovels tend to do that these days.Plus author, don't say lol at the end of some dialogue. Ruins immersion.Other than that, good work and keep going.

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The worst sign in novel I have read till now. It's a copy paste of past novels ...just done worse....there is no excitement and the techniques he gains are lame and not hyped enough. The things he gains are nerfed for plot and he apparently faces "bottlenecks" which sign in system MCs usually don't. In these types of novels fast cultivation is important as that is the main thing the novel is based around. Grasping this technique is very important and makes all the difference. imo till now "Sign in buddha's palm" has been my favourite in this genre even though I dropped it later on. Thing is it is very difficult to keep the attention of the audience in this premise. Good try by author but it was not executed very well. Hope your next book comes out better and you learn from this experience. :) <3

Story is decent and it's a nice read if you're bored - However the translation is so fucking awfull, it's in badly need of an editor. On another note, more and more stories on Qidian is really lacking editors, many of the stories are pretty much so badly mawed by the translator that it's impossible to read - This one/others Qidian is dropped until and editor comes along.

Does this really work? I tried to cultivate other than calming the mind nothing else happens. And also I have read more than 100 wuxia novels

I've read half the novel at chp 31 and it is almost all filled with filler most of the chapters aren't even needed or do anything for the story of the information in the 31 chapters it would only fill 5 good chapters

Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.