alright I'm gonna leave an actual review with some cons and pros cons: sometimes it gets a bit boring but it's pretty well rounded. no harem. it's pretty hard to imagine some of the stuff. pros: not some weird world domination thing it's similar to I am a prodigy by rugao under the bridge. no harem. Battle rabbit and pigeon.
The writing style could use some work, but other then that this story is great! I can honestly say I kept getting suprised by the author as to what was going to happen next to the MC, which is something rare to find on here. The story itself is very interesting, and stands out.I can't wait to read on and see what happens and just exactly what occurred in MCs past.Kudos to Author!
I am just giving up. The story is just depressing to read. I understand the point of the story. I understand why everything is happening the way it is. It isn't that the story doesn't make sense.The story is fairly well written with consistent updates. The pace of the story moves along at a good clip as well. The issue really comes down to the character design and world background. Both of these are intrinsically linked due to the primary antagonist, Heaven, also being an integral part of the world design itself.It just isn't fun to read. Who cares if the MC is overpowered if things are manipulated by Heaven so that he never has a real challenge? Who cares if the MC's Dad is one of the strongest beings in creation if he just allows the other strongest beings to harass and ultimately kill his children? Who cares about the MCs goals if he destroys himself in the process?The entire time I was reading I was just waiting for the other shoe to drop, for it to feel like the MC was actually making progress. After 100+ I am done. The story is just depressing and not fun. You know that every time he gets close to someone they are going to die or have their life ruined. You know he is never going to stumble upon something interesting unless the purpose of stumbling on it is to hurt him.Tragedy: "Tragedy is a form of drama based on human suffering and, mainly, the terrible or sorrowful events that befall a main character."This story really needs a tragedy tag so that people who don't want to leave in a worse mood than they started can avoid it.
I shall shameless vote my self a 5 on update, thank you for reading on my add free link as a editor and translator and also a author this book is quite good 140 Chapter left to go!! Read my book (I Can Create World)
"Upupupupu!" Sounded the weird, monochrome-sided bear-like creature. He danced on the table, spun around, then pointed towards the students in the gym. ""Hey there, howdy, hello! Is everyone here? Good! Then let's get things rolling!"
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