All in all, this novel is a nice read. You can tell that the author is just getting his bearings in the professional writing world, as there are some grammar and spelling issues.But mostly, it's just forgetting to pluralise words and sometimes a word will be missing the last letter, but you can still make sense of what they're trying to say.It's a typical reincarnation story featuring Arthur Grimwood, a boy of humble origins who got a second chance at life after leading a pretty miserable existence before his death.I've read several system novels and written one myself, so I understand them quite well, and Su5h1 has made a system that holds both more and less information than the usual one, including things that are possible to achieve, yet not attained.There are just a couple of gaps in realism which cause you to make a double-take.There were only eight chapters when writing this review, but I think you should give it a chance and keep an eye on the author and their future works as well, because they may achieve great things!
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