Ehh ain't my taste. It's too fast paced. And the characters are just... Stereotypical. I can't really see significance of the mc.. and the fmc was just annoying. Maybe if they put a quick cliche backstory about how he did something for her when they were kids, it'd be at least .1% more tolerable but I simply don't understand why she's so clingy and why he's so tolerant towards how condescending her character unconsciously is. He could've shown more discomfort of being looked down on as a poor kid. This is only after reading 20 chapters. It's not that serious, but I always feel annoyed when mc like this are so confident in themselves even though their so reliant on others. So I just felt like ranting about it...
Love your style of writing! It's all about emotions and you always deliver author!!! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep going and I'll keep coming along for the journey.
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