This novel started off very good where the MC was part of a city where everyone got teleported to a new world and they had to survive altogether. The city ultimately got overrun but MC went back in time and received an ability to upgrade himself through contribution points from changing the future. But then, two major flaws appeared as the chapter count got higher.1) Instead of focusing on growing stronger, the author decided to go all investigation of this and that, causing the novel to move sideways. Writing filler arcs are fine, but it's not fine when it goes on for 50 chapters.2) The author keeps throwing wikipedia info dumps whenever he/she can. Like our MC would slice apart a bus to throw the metal at monsters. But before he actually throws, there would be a paragraph on how the bus was made and what type of materials were used. And this happens constantly and becomes annoying as the story progresses.Those two things completely lowered the quality of this novel but I still recommend a try.
im currently at chapter 124 does mc still have no character development at all on later part of the story? because i felt like he was a simp and it doesn't change at all even though he has beauty by his side (sorry for grammatical error English is not my main language)
First of all, im dropping it, its grammar sucks, great story btw.If anyone can withstand its disgusting transalations, then welcome aboard, yu might enjoy the story hidden by the sacks of words thats all over the place.Author of the story is great but the translation to english is dissapointing.
It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.
It's bald.....Babysitter Mc.......First says time is important.....And spends time with goofballs..........Instead of levelling up.............................................................. .........First 7 chapters .....Blah....
really fun novel to read. I'm a huge fan of kingdom building types of novels and the fact it fits in with a cultivation type of novel makes if all the more interesting to me. Story development so far has been good so please keep up the good work 👍
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