"He did not answered your question." Said Michael. "Yes, he did not answered my question because of Henry!" May looked back with a cruel face. Henry surprised then sat down. "M-Me?" Henry pointed toward himself while making his faked tears.
Author cant keep a single thought on track, 11 chapters in and all we get is some random bs, no world building, and he cant even keep the characters names or what is around in check, also theres 2 dragons that have been introduced, so far but yet the author cant even keep track of that either.......
An interesting first five chapters that does a decent job of set up the mystery of who the main characters are and what they seemed to have become. Along with starting of why they became that way in the fifth chapter.
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