5 stars because I like the premise of the book. Can anyone give me the raws or any book that has a similar storyline? Doesn’t matter where the book is located.
I'm too stupid to understand your world , character design, background and situation of whole thing , your MC looks like yours not our , i can't be connected to YOUR stroy or MC or his circumstances .
have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.
From what I see the stability of the updates is nice - not that I look at that normally, as I know myself that sometimes it's difficult to write and post all the time ^^ I like the language used here - not too fancy, but not too basic. Perfect in-between so that even people who aren't native to English may enjoy the story without getting confused.As for characters - what I loved most was when I spotted a Polish name (makes me wonder if you too Dear Author, like me, are Polish ;) ). It's still pretty early but I think both the characters and the world are evolving nicely.I have one recommendation - the dialogue options would be more visible and it would be easier to read if you'd use B or I with them - it is a bit tiring on the eyes without it <3I hope Dear Author you'll see this as an encouragement to keep writing. One day you'll get more words like this, so keep it up - sharing your imagination with the world is a beautiful thing, so don't stop :)
"I will be very busy next week. I should work overtime so it's best to stay in the condo. it's near my office. Don't worry mom I'll visit you often. I promise." She raised her right hand while smiling.
Early next morning Roza was busy packing up what little possessions he had. One backpack was only enough to carry his clothing so he had to run to the supermarket to buy a suitcase. In it he packed up his Holocast and personal computer. At eleven in the morning Tony came to see off Roza at the substation. Half an hour later, Roza was on the hypertrain off to Courtlyn.
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