im at ch. 168 rn and can ANYONE tell me when TF mc will understand, A SECRET isnt A SECRET if YOU TELL IT TO JUST ABOUT ANYONE AND EVERYONE YOU MEET. am i the only one who thinks my dude has mental problems????
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a true hidden gem, it is a story with a lot of potential and although the grammar can be improved it is understandable and each chapter is improving. I hope you keep up the good work friend and don't drop it
I’m only on chapter 12, but….. this book has been and looks like it will be the book that I have been waiting for. Years have gone by and this is basically the book that I have been hoping and dreaming would one day be written. I love it. I’ll write another review later on the actual writing and how the book ends up but I had to put this out there with how excited I was
Surprisingly good story. Trully a hiden gem. It is a pity that there are no more chapters...The mc seems to be actually smart enough, and the progress of the story is rather consistent. The world itself and its people looks interesting too.So far I only found one tiny little plothole, but it's not that important. What I mean is that the core power of the mc comes from his wives and children. The more he has, the better for him. Under such a situation any person would increase such numbers as much as possible, but not the mc. Or at least not for a while. And the only explanation we get for that is that the mc is too lazy to search for more... Well, it's not very believable, but then again it's not that important in the story.Anyway, I totally recomend it.
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